My Survey
In order to help my group and I think of ideas for
the plot of our thriller opening, I created a survey that would help get an
audience opinion on what we should consider to make our thriller as best as we
can. I asked friends and family members to complete this survey. In total, 15
people completed my survey, of different ages.
The first question asked the person
their age. The majority of people who completed my survey were between the ages
of 15-25. 4 out of the 15 that completed the survey said their favorite genre of film was romance (and this turned out to be the most popular genre). Many
people also said the story line is what attracts them to a thriller film, which
suggested our group had to have a strong story line in order to attract people
to our thriller. 78% of those who took part (11/15) said the story line was the
most important thing to consider when making a thriller, and 14% (2 people)
said the music was the most important.
Furthermore, tension is obviously
important in a thriller and most people agreed that the music was the main thing
that creates the most suspense, while some also said setting creates the most
tension, as these are the forms of a thriller genre. This helped our group
because it enabled us to understand how we can create suspense in our own
thriller opening (we need an eerie setting and tension filled music to create
suspense). This also conforms to the conventions of a thriller.
One of the most important questions
in my survey was 'What do you think is the best way for a thriller film to
open?'. This was one of the most important questions because our task is to
create the opening to a thriller. We want to make ours as best as we can, and
by the results of my survey, the best way to start our thriller is in the past
or by using flashbacks and jump cuts.
Mini Pitch
Title: Why so serious?
My idea for our thriller focusses on an extraordinary man in the park
where he is in a standstill whilst the world blurs past time, the man has an
eerie presence about him as the camera closes in on him, you can see scars over
his face with blood all over him, but as time moves on you tell it’s not his
blood but the blood of someone or something, someone is following him he don’t
see the person but can sense them like he has a sixth sense. As the person is
in touching distance the man disappears all of a sudden leaving the follower
angry and distressed
Visuals and Sound:
The film would open on a black screen, and you can hear police sirens in the background. Suddenly, a man appears on the screen. This man is standing alone amidst a park and the fog is partially covering is face. His eyes are red and it’s quite obvious he may be using a drug. The sound of sirens would be echoing in the background, making it clear he is hiding from the police. The camera has a close up on his face and the camera shows the audience scars on this man’s face. He’s standing in the middle of the park with the police cars driving around the park. While his head is whipping, flashbacks would be shown.
Visuals and Sound:
The film would open on a black screen, and you can hear police sirens in the background. Suddenly, a man appears on the screen. This man is standing alone amidst a park and the fog is partially covering is face. His eyes are red and it’s quite obvious he may be using a drug. The sound of sirens would be echoing in the background, making it clear he is hiding from the police. The camera has a close up on his face and the camera shows the audience scars on this man’s face. He’s standing in the middle of the park with the police cars driving around the park. While his head is whipping, flashbacks would be shown.
The first flashback would be of this boy, his 3 friends and 5 other boys
(drug dealers) sitting around a table in a second floor flat. There are drugs
on the table. It would then cut back to the man holding his head and blood
dripping from his hands. The sound of the sirens has got louder and you can now
hear the voices of the policemen in the background shouting.
When he whips his head around for the second time, another flashback occurs. This time, the flashback shows a couple of men bursting in to his house with knives. These men were searching for this man for a long time with a deep reason. This may have been the reason why this man has so many scars on his face and an eerie background.
The third flashback has the police bursting into the house. They are
shouting and flashing lights. The police think that they have been involved in
something and tries to arrest them. These men shout to one another "run....
get out" and all the men try to escape. He then jumps out of a window and
runs. It then cuts back to present time. The sound of the sirens and the
policemen's voices are getting louder and louder and he feels the police
getting closer and closer. He walks slowly and mysteriously off into the park
just to find out that he’s being watched and followed. The screens then turns
black.