Friday, 26 February 2016

Mini Pitch Evaluation: New Idea First Draft

Title: Bystander

Our new idea will also be based at a teenagers house party, instead of it being based on the main characters doing drugs, one of the friends will go upstairs to find the bathroom, when he gets upstairs he sees something that he shouldn't have seen. As he makes his way up he can see a group of dangerous looking teenage boys pulling another boy into a room and quickly shutting the door, before he could hear the boys screaming "Shut up and stay put", just before the door slammed shot one of the bullies saw the bystander watching in disbelief, although he was aware that they were being watched they continued to scare the victim. This was followed by continuous screaming and threatening. The bystander walks away without saying a word. A half an hour passed until one of the bullies left the room and began searching for the bystander. 




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